Comments for Dinan Jeremiah Pingamage http://www.dinan.pingamage.com my world Sun, 04 Jul 2010 09:19:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 Comment on Trapped by Loku Seeya http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22&cpage=1#comment-252 Loku Seeya Sun, 04 Jul 2010 09:19:38 +0000 http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22#comment-252 Dear Dinan, Thank you for sharing your lovely story with us. Your creative skills in it are very impressive. It has all the features of a great suspence story for children- I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks again. Keep up the good work ! Loku seeya Dear Dinan,
Thank you for sharing your lovely story with us.
Your creative skills in it are very impressive.
It has all the features of a great suspence story for children- I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thanks again.
Keep up the good work !
Loku seeya

]]> Comment on About me by Yashica http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?page_id=2&cpage=1#comment-250 Yashica Sat, 03 Jul 2010 07:24:31 +0000 http://dinan.pingamage.com/?page_id=2#comment-250 loved the story loved the story

]]> Comment on Trapped by George, Chuti Seeya http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22&cpage=1#comment-248 George, Chuti Seeya Fri, 02 Jul 2010 21:59:44 +0000 http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22#comment-248 Dear Dinan Boy, I've enjoyed every bit of your story. I wished you were around when I was a small boy. So I could have enjoyed all the stories written by you. Well, then there were no Apple Macs those days (50 years ago). Dinan boy, could you teach those Aliens to speak in Sinhalese next time, instead of Japanese. Hope nanga is reading your stories? I will ask Lahiru bappa & Hiruni nanda also to read your story. Keep writing Dinan. I wish you all the best. Love Chuti Seeya, Dubai. Dear Dinan Boy,

I’ve enjoyed every bit of your story. I wished you were around when I was a small boy. So I could have enjoyed all the stories written by you. Well, then there were no Apple Macs those days (50 years ago).

Dinan boy, could you teach those Aliens to speak in Sinhalese next time, instead of Japanese.

Hope nanga is reading your stories? I will ask Lahiru bappa & Hiruni nanda also to read your story. Keep writing Dinan. I wish you all the best.

Love Chuti Seeya, Dubai.

]]> Comment on Trapped by Chami http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22&cpage=1#comment-247 Chami Fri, 02 Jul 2010 14:26:07 +0000 http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22#comment-247 Hi Dinan, Great story! You have a great imagination. We both could come up with a great story one day. I really liked the humor in it. Especially the part when the Aliens were going to chop off the kids heads and how they came up with the idea to run away when the Aliens closed their eyes. Next time get a dog to go with the kids. It will be fun to see what they all do. I’m sure Pixar will be happy to do a nice shot animation on this. Keep up the good work. I'll wait for the next one. Hi Dinan,

Great story! You have a great imagination. We both could come up with a great story one day.
I really liked the humor in it. Especially the part when the Aliens were going to chop off the kids heads and how they came up with the idea to run away when the Aliens closed their eyes.
Next time get a dog to go with the kids. It will be fun to see what they all do.

I’m sure Pixar will be happy to do a nice shot animation on this.

Keep up the good work. I’ll wait for the next one.

]]> Comment on Trapped by Miss Michelle http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22&cpage=1#comment-246 Miss Michelle Wed, 30 Jun 2010 10:52:33 +0000 http://www.dinan.pingamage.com/?p=22#comment-246 well done, Dinan. The story is greta very entertaining and i love how they all end up back together int he middle of the ocean. my only advice would be add some more adjective to describe those weird and wonderful aliens. you could also add some more details (a parragraph) about the island and what it was like. Some emotive language to describe how the boys were feeling when they were trying to escape would enhance the suspense of the story. well done again can't wait for the next installment. well done, Dinan. The story is greta very entertaining and i love how they all end up back together int he middle of the ocean.

my only advice would be add some more adjective to describe those weird and wonderful aliens. you could also add some more details (a parragraph) about the island and what it was like.

Some emotive language to describe how the boys were feeling when they were trying to escape would enhance the suspense of the story.

well done again

can’t wait for the next installment.

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